Chapter 5 ain't coming until October 1st

Recently , I have been using all of my time writing Barrakua Vol Creipt Prolougue , Chapters 1 , 2 , 3 and 4. Made me didn't have time to keep my heart in class ( we aren't actually learning anything though , coz' the major exams are OVA !!!!) , so i made a promise to myself , i will post ONE chapter every WEEK , LOL.................Of course , when i want to post more , i will post more .

BTW , i ain't wrting the story coz' i don't know what to write !!! My friends didn't actually give me some ideas , and you all aren't helping me out either.Please email me some ideas for chapter 5 !!!! Like episode 1 - the bridge , 2 - houndbears , 3-River of Kanuako , 4- Stranger...........

Please email me the ideas at : adrianaw@live.com.my or adrianxcomic@hotmail.com (The comic one , i don't actually open that email , but i check it frequently)Hope you all help me !!!!!!!!

And 1 more thingy , Chapter 5 won't come in until 1st of October unless someone sends me an idea of course !!!!!!

Barrakua Vol Creipt - Chapter 4 (The Stranger from Forest of Abgale)

After drying themselves up , Jake and Loreal continue to the Forest of Abgale after crossing the River of Kanuako , encountering with the divinely Dragon Von Empiar.The Forest of Abgale is a mysterious forest with a source of power.It always stay dark no matter how bright the sun is , nobody knows why it never shines.The creatures that lurks in the Forest of Abgale is terribly evil and powerful , only some of the best warriors have crossed the forest,though some had died when they just got in.

They crossed a deserted field with great speed to reach the one and only : Forest of Abgale."Woah , it's so ......so ..........." "Dark ?" Said Loreal " Yea.................."Replied Jake un-emotionally."So why was it called the Forest of ABGALE?" asked Jake . "Don't know , but we are going to find out soon............"

Without wasting any precious time , they started off with their journey into the forest.They just saw a few little harpers , but DARK harpers.Deeper in , DARK HoundBears stared at them , as like they never seen anything before..............DARK Eyepatchiers (The spelling is correct : Eyepatchiers), staring them with their millions of eyes , as like they never seen any human being before.

Suddenly , shouted Loreal while pointing north:" JAKE !!!! DO YOU SEE SMOKE COMING FROM THERE?!?!?! I THINK IT'S A FOREST FIRE !!!! " , " Forest fire? Oh My God !!!! we gotta save the forest !!!" Said Jake. They went to the scene to check if it's a real fire."Mark ?!?!?! Is that YOU ?!?!?!?!?!?" said Jake overeacting..................

"Jake ? Is it really you ? I haven't seen you in years !!!! " said the stranger."Do you know him Jake? "asked Loreal ."Hell ya , we knew each other since we were in diapers .But Mark had to move all the way to Alansia . I didn't know he could be in here !!! "

"HAHA , good times , good times......"Said Mark."So , how are you doing? where are you going to anyway? " asked Mark. " Well , obviously , we are going to the mountain to retrieve the stone of KUA." "WHAT ?!?!?! you mean you and the girl is the two people in the prophecy?!?! Oh My God , no wonder you want to cross this place !!! "

"Well , we really need to go on. We must cross the Forest of Abgale before dusk arrives." "Oh I see .............I can come with you !!! I know the way !!!! " "Great !! Let's go now ! So , Loreal ,Jake and Mark went through a shortcut to the edge of the mountain."Here we are Jake , The edge of the mountain which holds the key to the stone of KUA. But we must kill the guardian who protects the entrance " Mark said while pointing at a creature holding an axe .It is called The Guardian.

Without thinking carefully , Jake once again rushed to hit The Guardian."HENSHIN ......"Flames emitted from his body , Jake used Spirit Chain."Now , Combo Pulse !!! " WHACK !!! PUNCH !!! SLICE !!! Jake used a variety of combos to hit The Guardian.But The Guardian felt no pain.

Mark shouted :" It's back !!!! that's it's weakness !!!!! " KZZZZZZT !!!! The Guardian threw a lightning Ball towards Jake.Luckily Jake dodged it , but the lightning ball hit Mark in the chest."OWWWWWW , OUCH !!!!!!" And there was silence................

'My Heart...........it hurts..........yes........this is the death ball................'And Mark's world went pitch black.........................."NOOOOOOOOOOOO , YOU-WILL- P A Y !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"Shouted Jake with rage , anger and hatred. SLICE SLICE SLICE SLICE SLICE SLICE SLICE.Combo slicing Jake did.The Guardian whimpered in pain , then it fell forwards , landed head first.

"Mark , Mark !!! Are you all right ?!?!?! " said Jake worriedly."Jake.........continu.....e......Yo-You.....r.......Journ.......ey.........Uhhhhh.......I thinkkk.......my ttti.......me has.......ended......Her..........e..................................................."After saying his last words , Mark died after getting hit by The Guardian's Death Ball.

"Yes Mark , i promise that i will finish the quest with Loreal , we must succeed.........."Jake started to cry. He started to cry loudly."Don't worry Jake , we will make Mark proud by finding the stone of KUA !" said Loreal confidently."Yes Loreal................we will............we will" Jake said while wiping tears from his face...................................................

Barrakua Vol Creipt - Chapter 3 ( The Clutches of the River of Kanuako)

After the encounter with Demolic HoundBears , Jake and Loreal wake up the next morning finding themselves safe.After having a delicious breakfast , they continue their journey.Jake took a small map that shows to whole map of Barra.He pointed out where they were , he said:"Oh no........Loreal , i don't think you want to know this..........But the next place we are going to .......It's River of Kanuako........" " What ?!?!?! The River of Kanuako ?!?!?! It's the most dangerous river that has the one and only Dragon Von Empiar !!! What are we going to do ?"Said Loreal while panicking.

"It's OK , i think we can kill it , we might even get a small fortune for it's rare Empiar horns ."Replied Jake smooothly."It's not about the money Jake , it's about our safety !!! Safety : Priority First !!!! " said Loreal loudly."Well , there's no other way"said Jake while pointing at his small map."Fine Jake , but we must really be careful........"Replied Loreal softly.

2 hours later......

"Nooooooooooooo !!!! We're LOST !!!!! LOST IN THE WOODS !!!! " shouted Jake."I should have walked East , not West !!!".Suddenly , shhhhhh , shhhhhhh ..........."What was that sound ? " Asked Jake. "I think it is the Waterfall of Grush ! It's very near to the River of Kanuako !" Said Loreal with hope.
"OK , then we shall go that way to the waterfall ! " Ordered Jake.
That's it !!! That's the Waterfall of Grush !!! " "And that's the River of Kanuako !!!"Said Jake happily."Let's cross it now !!! " Shouted Jake.

"WAIT !!!"Loreal shouted loudly.Too late , Jake has already started to cross the River. SPLASHHHHHH~~~~~~~.Many drops of water came bursting out from the center of the river."Jake Vol , that's the Dragon Von Empiar !!!! " "Oh My God It's huge !!!!! It is about 100 metres and 13 inches long !!!!! "

The Dragon Von Empiar is a massive dragon that hides in the River of Kanuako.It is belived to be fake , because of the size , no body belived it at all , they didn't belive that it could fit inside The River of Kakuano.Though , there is rumoured that the Dragon Von Empiar lives in a mysterious cave filled with treasury that costs a fortune.Some people wanted to steal it because of greed , but failed to find it and was eaten by the Dragon Von Empiar.This dragon has 3 claws at each hand and feet , 5 inches long each .It's horns is a symbol of courage and bravery , worth a fortune.It's scales are made of pearls which it feeds on to live.However , some people managed to cross the river alive without being eaten , because they finished the quest given by the Dragon.

"So Loreal , are we gonna fight it?" " No Jake , we are not supposed to , it can kill you with one of it's talons. We MUST finished the quest given by it." "Who dares interrupt my sleep? Who interrupts shall DIE !!"Dragon Von Empiar boomed."Errmm , we are just here to cross the lake."
" I see no harm from you , but you must finish the quest given or i shall EAT you ALL."

"Bring it on Dragon " Said Jake confidently."OK , i want you to solve this riddle to get pass"Said the Dragon while licking it's teeth.This is the riddle :

This Creature comes out at dusk , but not dawn ,
With one eye , it seeks for prey ,
When dawn comes , Rock it turns ,
It seeks everything,
It's size,
Is unbelievable ,
Where 3 HoundBears shall not fit.

" So visitors , what is the answer? I shall give you 3 chances"

1st chance was Jake's :" It must be the Cyclops , where he hunts with one eye." " That is not the answer !!!! " BOOMED Dragon Von Empiar. "2 More chances !!!! "

Loreal shouted :"It must be you !!!! where your size is unbelievable , 3 houndbears could not fit."
"That is not the answer too ! "Said the dragon happily , thinking of his next meal.

Jake thought for 15 minutes , then he finally said something : " It's power............." " GOOD JOB !!!! " said the dragon."How did you know the answer ? " demanded the dragon."My dear friend is the one who told me , it's Jason !!!! He told me this before he died , he told me power seeks for everything , where its power is wide , not even 3 HoundBears can cover it , It needs one eye to seek for power , where it shall expire at dawn."

"You shall pass , visitors , you have well proved yourselves , OUTSTANDING!!!! bravo , bravo !!! "

With the luck they got , the crossed the most dangerous river in Barra......................

Barrakua Vol Creipt - Chapter 2(The monstrous fight with a dozen of HoundBears)

The sun slowly lowers its body , letting dusk , stars and the moon to take over the sky.It was time that Jake and Loreal stop for a rest and get some shut eye.After they had some dinner , they had a little chat . " Ermm , Loreal ?"Jake said. "Yeah Jake ? What's the matter? " , " Is there anything wrong ?" Asked Loreal innocently."Are you afraid of this journey ? that you might die ? " Asked Jake with a low voice."Nonsense !!!!! No one is going to die Jake !!! We will look after each other so we will be safe ! "Said Loreal loudly.

Jake thought to himself : Yeah , Loreal's right , there's nothing to be afraid of . Loreal looked up to the sky and said : "I think it's time to sleep Jake , you can see the constellations appearing and the moon starting to come out." " OK Loreal " . After they ate supper , they went to sleep quietly , hoping to not alert any trouble.At midnight , The cold breeze blew by , The silent night was broken by a deafening growl from far ahead.Only some people encountered with this creature and survived - The Houndbear.It's about 2 metres and 3 inches tall , With razor-sharp claws that can even cut through pure diamond.It's skull is as hard as steel , not even a brutal blow in the head can damage the gruesome beast.It's tail can emit a stange odour that weakens it's enemy , it usually uses it when hunting for food. If it can't hunt a prey , it will forage forests for berries to eat.

And yeah , it's next prey will be still sleeping - Loreal and Jake.In the shadows , the Harpers can only make shape of the HoundBears , about 2 of them , heading south , where Jake and Loreal were heading too.The HoundBears kept watch on the Mountain of Wasow , where the cave of HoundBears is located.The saw Jake and Loreal coming , they thought of an ambush when they are asleep.With tip-toeing around , hey reached their campsite . ROAR !!!!!! The HoundBear roars with its huge lungs , making a sonic roar !! Loreal and Jake were startled by the defeaning roar , they went out with their weapons to check . Loreal shouted :"Houndbears , dozens of them !!!! " " What are HoundBears Loreal ? " , " You don't wanna know Jake " said Loreal while shaking.

" DODGE !!! " shouted Loreal.Immeditely , Jake and Loreal dodged the deadly slash of one of the HoundBears."We can't beat'em all Jake !!!" The ratio of us winning is 10 to 0.1!!! "I - DON'T - CARE !!! " with anger rising . " HENSHIN !!! " , Jake concentrated , flames emitted around him.Loreal knew that the training he had was put in good use in desperate times like now.Jake turned into someone else , but he was still Jake , this skill was called Spirit Chain.It takes 2 years to master and 3 years to improve it.Jake doesn't feel pain when he is in Spirit Chain , but he returns to normal after he gets 10 hits from anything.

"NOW , YOU , D-I-E , DIE !!!!! " Jake crazily slashed his flaming sword around , hitting 4 HoundBears at one time.Killing them without mercy , with blood spilling everywhere.Loreal also supported Jake , she shot some arrows to a HoundBear who almost ambushed Jake from behind.After a deadly battle , Dozens and dozens of Houndbears lying dead on the ground.With no presence of life........Jake and Loreal were very tired and they went back to sleep after settling down . They were once again warned........It is going to be tougher when they go deeper and deeper and deeper..................................

Barrakua Vol Creipt - Chapter 1 (The First Warning)

The days passed quickly , leaves were starting to fall , the son of Vol - Jake , thought : It's already autumn , first i remember my training with dad and Loreal(daughter of Creipt) were in spring ...... He cursed the prophecy , he did not wanted to go on a dangerous journey to the deep , he wanted a peaceful life , a happy life.Jake had high intelligence when he was a child , he started his training with his father at the age of 7 , he was sad and angry for being the son of Vol.

Loreal in the other hand , was the daughter of Creipt , she did not think of it as bad luck , she thought it the positive way : I CAN SAVE THE WORLD , I AM LUCKY !!!.After 5 years of intensive training , Jake and Loreal started their journey to find the stone of KUA at the age of 16.At the beginning of the quest , it was easy as ABC , they had help from some nearby villages. But the deeper they went to the mountains , there were no help given.The second day of the journey , the packed up everything including food , water , weapons , potions , camp , some wood , and other stuff.Then , they continue journeing into the deep.

In the road , they saw many types of creatures .Some , they helped , some , they fought without mercy.It was tough , but they knew it would be harder in the mountains.....They were still in the domain of the town Barra.After a 3 hour walk , they finally reached The Bridge of Kawana , known as the most dangerous bridge in the whole domain.Jake said:"So Loreal , are we just going to pass the bridge ? " " No , i don't think so Jake , it might be dangerous ! "replied Loreal."So , how ? " asked Jake."I'm going try to cross the bridge , to check the stability of the bridge." "OK......." said Jake deeply.

Loreal started walking across the unstable bridge , almost fell 2 times when crossing . Finally , she luckily crossed the bridge unharmed.

Loreal shouted with her might :" JAKE !!!! IT'S YOUR TURN !!!! IT'S OK TO CROSS !!!! "
Jake replied : " Ok , I'm coming ! "
With a good start , Jake went on balancing very well on the bridge.Suddenly , CRACK !
The bridge broke !!! Jake lost balance and fell into the deep .Luckily , he caught hold of the ledge of the cliff , he then slowly climbed up.He breathed deeply , thanking GOD for sparring his dear life.
Lorean asked Jake immediately :"Jake !!! Are you OK? i saw your condition and was very very worried ! "
"Yeah , i'm ok....."said Jake while breathing deeply.And with the first warning from mother nature and evil bad-luck , they continued their journey to the mountain to find the stone of KUA.

Barrakua Vol Creipt - Prolougue

In ancient times of the dragons and war , A mysterious power lies within the heart of an unknown city - Barra.The power is rumoured to have every type of element , power that is uncontrollable and inimaginable . Everyone is Barra feared that their city will be destroyed by this mysterious power the emits from the ground one day.Some people say that the power is made out of stone created by the devil , some say it is in the core of the earth , some say the world will end in the future...........The mysterious power spreaded to the whole world.....WAR began for the great power...........

There was also a Prophecy that describes :

Once War has strike after 2 years in the world ,
The son of Vol and the daughter of Creipt ,
Shall bring courage , power
To find the stone of KUA ,
Passing various difficulties,
In order to bring peace once again to the Earth ,
Defeat the mysterious power the emits,
From the beloved town of Barra.......

After 2 years , The prophecy came true.................The son of Vol and the daughter of Creipt were savely delivered to the human realm , ready and trained for the journey for the stone of KUA , to bring peace in the world..................

I'm thinking of something new................

Should i post a story sequence in my blog? To make visitors interested? HELL YA.

I'm deciding to post a story titled ( Of course , i made it ) : Barrakua Vol Creipt

The title is quite understandable ( i don't either) , But it gives the story a good name , i think.........LOL , Anyway , it's gonna be bloody and many creatures i made ( drew and invented at school , wad ? i was bored )will be introduced.Bones , dragons , knights will also be in this story , i will just be WAR.

Forgot one thing !!!!

U must also send the number u chose ~!!!!! or i will not know who won !!!!

My book that i ordered..........

1 MONTH HAS ALREADY PASSED SO FAST...................I have ordered a book since August 2008 , now , 18th September 2008 , the book hasn't come.It WILL be PUBLISHED in America on 26TH AUGUST , i'm in Malaysia , it takes about 2 weeks to send it here...........1 MONTH.......haven't get it.............I'm drizzling already...........T_T..................

My saliva (EWWWW) is dropping ,i'm in hunger of that book...........Wnna noe wad is that book?...........It's NIGHTMARE ACADEMY !!!!!! U all should read this book , it ain't hard to ready at all , though it has 200 pages (Noob book , 200 ? is that all u got?I've read " Psychology For Morons / Dummies" before)That book is fiction actually , not realy at all.In that book , there are two type of jobs ( or u can say Tribe) : Banisher or Nethermancer.

U gotta love it.The four artefacts of the nether is held by four of the Named , who quest to create the fifth Named.It is held by : Barakkas , Slagguron , Tyrannus and Verminion. I advice those who want to improve their english to read this awesome book.If you meet with a word you don't understand , be hard-working , find the meaning of the wod in the dictionary , or ask someone who knows............

I'n still depressed coz' my book hasn't come.........................

One more thing to remember

After u vote , send in your name , email address so that i can send the advices about improving on English and how to make good blogs for the winners.The results will come out at 30th of September !!!! so hurry up !!!! I might even change a date !!!! Send the informaions to my email : adrianaw@live.com.my

Goodluck !!!!!

E-P-I-C

WAR !!!!! Well , the major exams are over , we have war in our class !!!! Well , SOME of us fly paper airplanes , haha.........LOL.............................Well , i'm not quite free.^_^ , coz' i have Spritzer Cup Training .We secretly bring chess to training to play coz' when we finished , we are supa bored..........Anyway, i know the starting is really boring(This blog) , but the rest is gonna be E-P-I-C !!!!

Well , i lied . I don't know what to write....Recently , i've checked my emails , guess how many emails , vote on the poll in my blog , and i will announce the results !!!!! Anyway , the first poll i made , i checked it and i said :" Oh My Gawd !!!!!!!! OMG !!!!!! O-M-G !!!!!! , it's nothing , really." Weird?? well , i said it would be E-P-I-C .Not epic , haha , u got tricked !!!!

Remember , before u leave my blog , vote and guess the number of emails i got when i checked it !!!!!

Subscribe to xKaWaIIxneKOx on youtube !!!

Well , i have introduced some videos makers , but i haven't introduced this PRO video maker (Like to make fun with the PRO word) , and she is xKaWaIIxneKOx.Her videos make me wann cry T_T , very touching and sad..........

Her videos also come in episodes , her longest video was " Lost Feelings" It has 18 episodes and a Bonus Episode.It's about a girl , who was collided with a car crash , then rewakes up.She finds a guy who helps her in the hospital.And yes , she is in Amnesia(means she forgot everything).She thens scramble into a big adventure to find her true love.She stumbles upon Murderers , love hunters , Break ups and more.Does all good things have to come to an end? Will two childhood friends discover true love? Or will everything end the way she thought it would?Watch It yourself !!!!!

And one more thing , REMEMBER TO SUBSCRIBE TO HER , HER AIM : 900 ~1000 SUBSCRIBERS !!!!!!

MushiKing

Have you all ever heard of MushiKing?It's actually a virtual Beetle battle game , where u slash the beetles card data into a machine(Not for sale) and u start the game.U can choose to play individually or Versus your dear friends.This game is quite fun , where u get to use cool skills with cool graphics.This game is originated in Japan , it is sent to worldwide , i think.In malaysia , only a few states have this so called "MushiKing".I have played it and i love it.

There are different types of beetle for you to choose from.From to longest to the shortest , Heaviest to the Lightest , Most powerful to the Weakest , And even style and ugly .Skills are used to increase the damage for your beetle , or for defence.Super Skills's priority is to deliver a final or Mega blow to the opponent , which u use it in the end , Or starting .U can defeat various stages to unlock the special stage , where u must fight a powerful beetle.

U get a card in the starting of a game.If u defeat the beetle in the special stage , u get another card , cool isn't it ?I have never defeated the boss in the special stage coz' i keep dieng in the stage(Lack of HP).U will not recover any Health Points during the game(Except for using a healing skill , Then u can heal yourself)

Virus and hackerz

DAM !!!!!!!!! I'm sorry that i have to shout at this beginning of a blog.............BUT , HACKERZ SUCKS !!!!!! About 5 months ago , i was a noob in the internet , SOME hackers opened my FRIEND'S MSN ACCOUNT , sended me viruses .I was stupid enough to accept it twice !!!! So i have sweared to never receive any viruses ..........For the rest of those 5 months , no hackerz , no viruses......................

Until one day...............My friend just onlined , then he asked me :" should i put this picture on MySpace?" Then , i was like going :" Get out !!!! GET OUT U DAM HACKER!!!!!" I was very very angry , 5 months without hackerz nor viruses , then they come back to haunt me.I was so angry , i almost deleted this whole Blog !!!!! So , hope that you people out there... Can be very caoutios when encountered with a hacker ...... And please don't join those ****ing hackerz ...............

PS , i'm sorry to have to put foul word at **** , sorry for any incovienience caused !

-2 , Negative two already , LOL !!!

Well , today ( 10th September 2008) is officially the 2nd day of the mighty all-powerful UPSR.That means -2(Negative 2) in the coundown , LOL !!! After school tomorrow (11th September 2008) , i'm 100% free.Maple everyday , make videos using bannedstory(if i can!!) , Watch movies with my friends , go to cybercafes(We are actually not allowed)...........And more stuff to do.

Well.......... GOODY , I WILL BE POSTING A BLOG EVERYDAY FROM TODAY !!! YAY !!! YIPPEE !!! No' i'm juz kidding , It sucks !!! It takes me about 15 minute to think of a blog to write , 15 minutes..... TO THINK !!!!!! Then 3~30 minutes to type it out , but depends on the blog length.LAWL

UPSR is more harder than i though it would.........Now , me must have at least 83% juz to pass chinese , LAWL !!! HELL LIKE !!!Who made this rule? WHO? WhO??!!!I'm afraid i can't beat the system..........My friend once told me : " If you can't beat the system , just pass it !! And it even sounds good !! " It really took all the pressure off'a me.So you should too !!!