The sun slowly lowers its body , letting dusk , stars and the moon to take over the sky.It was time that Jake and Loreal stop for a rest and get some shut eye.After they had some dinner , they had a little chat . " Ermm , Loreal ?"Jake said. "Yeah Jake ? What's the matter? " , " Is there anything wrong ?" Asked Loreal innocently."Are you afraid of this journey ? that you might die ? " Asked Jake with a low voice."Nonsense !!!!! No one is going to die Jake !!! We will look after each other so we will be safe ! "Said Loreal loudly.
Jake thought to himself : Yeah , Loreal's right , there's nothing to be afraid of . Loreal looked up to the sky and said : "I think it's time to sleep Jake , you can see the constellations appearing and the moon starting to come out." " OK Loreal " . After they ate supper , they went to sleep quietly , hoping to not alert any trouble.At midnight , The cold breeze blew by , The silent night was broken by a deafening growl from far ahead.Only some people encountered with this creature and survived - The Houndbear.It's about 2 metres and 3 inches tall , With razor-sharp claws that can even cut through pure diamond.It's skull is as hard as steel , not even a brutal blow in the head can damage the gruesome beast.It's tail can emit a stange odour that weakens it's enemy , it usually uses it when hunting for food. If it can't hunt a prey , it will forage forests for berries to eat.
And yeah , it's next prey will be still sleeping - Loreal and Jake.In the shadows , the Harpers can only make shape of the HoundBears , about 2 of them , heading south , where Jake and Loreal were heading too.The HoundBears kept watch on the Mountain of Wasow , where the cave of HoundBears is located.The saw Jake and Loreal coming , they thought of an ambush when they are asleep.With tip-toeing around , hey reached their campsite . ROAR !!!!!! The HoundBear roars with its huge lungs , making a sonic roar !! Loreal and Jake were startled by the defeaning roar , they went out with their weapons to check . Loreal shouted :"Houndbears , dozens of them !!!! " " What are HoundBears Loreal ? " , " You don't wanna know Jake " said Loreal while shaking.
" DODGE !!! " shouted Loreal.Immeditely , Jake and Loreal dodged the deadly slash of one of the HoundBears."We can't beat'em all Jake !!!" The ratio of us winning is 10 to 0.1!!! "I - DON'T - CARE !!! " with anger rising . " HENSHIN !!! " , Jake concentrated , flames emitted around him.Loreal knew that the training he had was put in good use in desperate times like now.Jake turned into someone else , but he was still Jake , this skill was called Spirit Chain.It takes 2 years to master and 3 years to improve it.Jake doesn't feel pain when he is in Spirit Chain , but he returns to normal after he gets 10 hits from anything.
"NOW , YOU , D-I-E , DIE !!!!! " Jake crazily slashed his flaming sword around , hitting 4 HoundBears at one time.Killing them without mercy , with blood spilling everywhere.Loreal also supported Jake , she shot some arrows to a HoundBear who almost ambushed Jake from behind.After a deadly battle , Dozens and dozens of Houndbears lying dead on the ground.With no presence of life........Jake and Loreal were very tired and they went back to sleep after settling down . They were once again warned........It is going to be tougher when they go deeper and deeper and deeper..................................


5 comments:
your story is great, cool! Keep it up! I hope you van post chapter 3 tommorow! Anyway, is the title's language Sepanyol?
I'll always support you! Love it!
Sepanyol ?
Yea , kinda . That's all i could reffer , KINDA
dun write too long
TOO LONG ? BEST
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